Saturday, November 24, 2018

The Evolution of a Cover

My Mom always used to say that your first child should be disposable because a first -time mother makes all her mistakes on that poor first child. The same principle applies to the cover of your first novel. 

Way back in 2011, I made all my mistakes on that first cover of the first edition of my first novel "DANCING IN THE SHADOW OF LOVE." The end result was nothing like I wanted it to be.
I loved my second cover, designed by a professional in 2012. But, as beautiful and unusual as it is, it still wasn't quite right for the book: it sent the wrong message to readers. This novel is not a romance novel, but a hard-hitting,  gritty spiritual allegory.  

In 2018, I decided to try again. I returned to the beginning. The artwork of my 2011 and 2018 covers is a mixed media painting by South African artist, Martin Wenkidu. Called "Man and the World of Stars" it - like the novel - is dense with symbolism. You can read an interview with the artist here, where he explains the imagery and symbolism.  This image resonates deeply with the content of the novel: the three figures in the dance of life, arms upraised to connect to the Divine, coming out of the shadows and into the light of Love. 


Third time lucky! Using the original artwork, Wendy from Apple Pie Graphics did a stunning job on the cover. Now I feel this book is finally complete and I can close the chapter on it. What a relief!
















Monday, February 17, 2014

Dancing in the Shadows of Love: Book Trailer and Reviews

This Amazon review is for: Dancing in the Shadows of Love (Paperback)
By  MadameRue5.0 out of 5 stars Absolutely extraordinary! June 17, 2014

It intrigued and enthralled me at the same time parts of it horrified me and made my heart ache.

This book is unlike any book I've ever read before. There seem to be so few books nowadays that are UNIQUE. Yes, there are other books about religion; yes, there are other books about lust, betrayal, trust, love, etc.; no, there are no other books I've read that I could honestly say are similar to this one. For that alone I love it.

The entire book is absolutely wrenching, and yet the spirit, tenacity and strength of the women coupled with the poignant, underlying lessons of love, faith, trust and understanding makes it uplifting.

I don't generally like religious books, but this one was extraordinary.
Dancing in the Shadows of Love Book Trailer:


Vlog Review of Dancing in the Shadows of Love by Gary Butler of Gary's Reviews: (with the old first edition cover)


For current reviews visit GOODREADS reviews by clicking here

Wednesday, April 4, 2012

The Final Dance


Much as I love Wenkidu's original artwork "Man and the World of Stars", and as much as I love the first cover created using it, the multi-talented Michelle Davidson Argyle has surpassed her first cover with a second offering that took my breath away:


This is the second sample cover for DANCING IN THE SHADOWS OF LOVE – it’s a more  commercial, but it's still different and, in a way, reflects my writing style better.

The first new cover Michelle designed is bold, striking, exotic and stunning. While this cover is also unusual and striking, it's different in a more subtle, intriguing, gentle and ethereal way. 

I also love the veiled mirror reflection of the woman, suggesting “two faces”  (two sides) to everything.  As each of the characters in the story have to find the real person behind the masks they wear, this watersplashes mask on the woman's face  and the veiled reflection hint at the story.

The more I looked at this cover sample, the more it talked to me – thinking of the reviews to date of my book, my writing comes across as lyrical, mystical and gentle rather than big and bold. The soft and mysterious watersplash mask cover definitely taps into that energy.

So...this is it! The final cover for DANCING IN THE SHADOWS OF LOVE. I'm so relieved, because, while I have no expectations that the cover will suddenly turn the book into an overnight best seller, I can now put the book to rest knowing that it has the perfect cover.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012

A New Dance: Take 1

Exciting news for my novel DANCING IN THE SHADOWS OF LOVE!


I'm working with the multi-talented Michelle Davidson Argyle on a new cover for Dancing in the Shadows of Love.


Here's the first new mock-up, using the original cover's artwork:


Brilliant, isn't it? What do you think?

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

What is Love?


While the first theme from “Dancing in the Shadows of Love” , War versus Peace, is hidden in the shadows of the text,  another theme is boldly stated in the title:  LOVE.

The search for Love, and for an understanding of what Love is, drives the story and the characters' actions.

There are three possible interpretations of love (1):

The first is romantic or erotic love. This is lowest form of love, as it is of the body and belongs in the material world, containing only the potential of what Love is.

This potential can grow into the second form of love: platonic love, or friendship. This is an intellectual Love, springing from the mind, and it’s a love that still sees the other as separate from the self.

Finally, when love reaches its highest potential, it transfigures difference into a mystical union with all other sentient creatures and becomes Divine Love. Arising from the heart and soul, this highest form of Love allows us to vanquish any sense of alienation that we may experience in an increasingly isolationist modern world.

In “Dancing in the Shadows of Love,” Grace represents this ideal of Divine Love. Her compassion for all other creatures–animals and humans–transcends all difference and brings with it peace (the opposite of war) and love (the opposite of hate.)

Grace loves unconditionally: she accepts both the flaws and differences in others with a compassionate understanding born of the Divine Love she feels. She chooses, in humble, ordinary ways, to live out her compassion by showing only kindness. This spiritual gift draws others to her “like beggars wanting to touch the garment of a Master for their salvation.”

Jamila, succumbing to her own ezomo (inner demon), struggles to transcend her prejudices: her physical difference to Lulu is too wide an abyss for her to take a leap of faith and recognise that Lulu is her true friend.

Zahra’s misunderstanding of the kind of love Enoch and Grace share arises out of her obsession with placing her faith in material goods: that which she can see and feel and touch. From the first, she recognises that this outlander, this Enoch, has something to offer. But Zahra sees her alter ego Little Flower as evil, and can’t accept what Little Flower represents in her life.

The innocent Little Flower struggles to exist within Zahra’s soul, seeking a divine connection with Grace and Enoch and the abused girl Hope, while Zahra, finally realising material goods do not offer her the love she seeks, turns to Enoch. “I love you, Enoch,” Zahra says as she kisses him. “This is not love,” he replies.

So, what is love?

If Grace represents the ideal form of Divine Love, Lulu is the protagonist who has the most potential to achieve a state of grace.  And, no, Grace’s name is not a coincidence! 

Born a Pale One, persecuted for her difference,
Lulu learns it's easier to hate than to love
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Lulu is doomed to be forever separate from others by virtue of her birth as a Pale One (a person with albinism.) In the “land of normality,” difference is seen as an ezomo that must be conquered.  Despised for her difference from the moment she is born, still Lulu seeks love.


At first, she seeks love in its lowest form: romantic love. In her loneliness, she misunderstands Sub-Prioress Dalia’s compassion, and her love turns to hatred.

Then, on her arrival at the Court of St Jerome, she sees in Jamila the potential for another kind of love: amity.  But Jamila, afraid of Lulu’s difference, cannot offer her the friendship she seeks.

Finally, purified in a cleansing thunderstorm as she hides in the Garden of Remembrance at the foot of Grace’s memorial, Lulu surrenders to the love only Enoch can offer her:
           
He is a vision of the new day I have longed for all my life. Only this time, I can choose the colour of my freedom. I wipe away the last remnants of my tears and see my future before me: doubt or belief; despair or hope; hatred or love. Which will I choose for the rest of my life?"

But Lulu, although she comes to realise what Love is, still has a difficult choice to face: despite her own emotional wounds, despite her anger at the persecution and betrayals she has suffered, is she capable of showing compassion even to those she hates?

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Read “Dancing in the Shadows of Love” to find out whether Lulu chooses to hate or to love.


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(1) Osho. 1994. Osho Zen Tarot: The Transcendental Game of Zen. Gateway Publishers. United Kingdom. Pp. 14-15.
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Images purchased from iStock
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Monday, October 17, 2011

How do we stop The War?


Similar to Joseph’s famous coat, “Dancing in the Shadows of Love” is a text of many layers. Many of these layers only became obvious to me once I had finished writing the story. But there were three major themes I deliberately focused on when writing the draft versions.  

The first of these themes is:

War versus Peace

Unspecified, but ever present in the background of "Dancing in the Shadows of Love", The War encapsulates a major theme of the story: that humans must find peace and unity on a personal level, before they can find it on a universal or national level.

In a spiritual sense, every war concerns the struggle of light against darkness (good vs evil); war can be a means of reducing disorder to order; war echoes the sacrifice made in order to re-instate the original order in both the material plane (real wars) and the spiritual plane.

On the spiritual plane war symbolizes humankind’s internal struggle with duality: a restoration of order would thus restore an inner unity or inner peace to the individual soul.

Each of the three women has a personal “war” to fight: Lulu must fight her hatred; Jamila must fight her ambition and Zahra must fight greed. 

The never-ending echo of The War in the background of their lives suggests that, until these women can find inner peace on a personal level, universal or world peace will always remain elusive to mankind.

"Here rests in honoured glory
A Comrade in Arms
Known but to God"
Normandy, France
Image purchased from iStock
Wanting to change the world and stop The War, Dawud, Zahra's grandson, goes off to fight The War. 

But, Dawud's sacrifice - as was his parents' before him - is meaningless, for The War continues, generation after generation. 

But what happens to Lulu, Jamila and Zahra while Dawud is off fighting The War?

Overwhelmed by the minutia of living an ordinary life, the women battle their "enemy": their emotional wounds and their inner demons in a harsh world that offers little hope of a restoration of order that will bring them the happiness they long for.

But, as the mysterious spiritual guide Enoch says to Lulu, "Make different choices for yourself and you can give mankind a different history." 

The theme  of “Dancing in the Shadows of Love” is a reflection of the words spoken by Indian politician and pacifist, Mahatma Mohandas Gandhi (1869-1948): “If we could change ourselves, the tendencies in the world would also change.  As a man changes his own nature, so does the attitude of the world change towards him...we need not wait to see what others do.

Can Lulu, Jamila and Zahra heal their own nature enough to bring peace and harmony to their lives?

Perhaps, when they find the inner peace that spirals ever outward to embrace their community and the world in which they live, then The War that never ends…will end.
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Read more about helping bring peace to the world in this post Looking Inward for Peace

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Read about the other themes in Dancing in the Shadows of Love by clicking on the links below:

The Nature of Prejudice; the Illusion of Difference

What is Love?
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